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Sunset at Mesa
Eileen Hogan
My proposal is to
project an image, on the campus wall, that displays the importance of
education. I believe education is an avenue that can bring about change in a
person’s life. Sometimes people are constrained by circumstances that are
beyond their control and I feel education can lift individuals out of these
constraints. Through education one can set goals for their life and think of
different life possibilities once they obtain an education. With my wall I
attempted to exhibit freedom through education. I blended the education text
layer so that it looked like it was part of the wall and blended the “Fly like
a bird” to look like it pops out from the wall. My thoughts are that the mural
may give individuals inspiration as they walk by.
“people create and
continually re-create themselves in contact with others; indeed, this self is
ultimately a process” (Alvesson & Skoldberg)
Reference
http://www.d-aep.org/d-aep/home.html
Eileen Hogan
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Eileen,
ReplyDeleteA nice choice on the picture, the expression of "flying" for education, a great sentiment. I would do a quick adjust on the layers panel with the opacity slider and reduce the opacity a little so it blends into the wall some more :>)
-Russ Martin
Thank you Russ for your suggestion. This was difficult for me because of my inexperience but I loved learning about Photo Shop. On review of my work I think I got a little carried away and should have kept it simple. I am going to attempt redoing it.
DeleteEileen Hogan
I think you have a good idea, however I think your picture of the mural would benefit from reducing the opacity and having the letters as well as the photo itself move along the wall rather than just be stretched across. Other than that it's very creative. Good job.
ReplyDelete-Chelsea Cameron
I agree with you reducing the opacity would have been better. Thank you for your comments.
DeleteEileen Hogan
I love the theme that you chose here, when I was younger I never realized what a good education would do for me. It's great to have that kind of reminder around so people will think about it every day when they see this. -Abigail Argonza
ReplyDeleteThank you Abigail. I think I made it a little too busy but the next time. I am just learning about the power of photo shop.
DeleteEileen Hogan
Education is very important. I think this mural definitely gets the message clearly scene. -Chris Boyer
ReplyDeleteThank you. Education is important and I believe we never stop learning.
DeleteEileen Hogan
The image of the sunset fits well onto this wall. The image would have looked much better if you had lowered the opacity considerably lower. You are try to raise the awareness of education, unfortunately the font selected for your text is not very legible.
ReplyDeleteViolet Gutierrez
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ReplyDeleteThe image and message work well for Mesa College. One suggestion I would make is to have the "Fly Like a Bird" angled away from the ground and toward the sky. Having it hit the ground kind of works against the message. -- John Zeller
ReplyDeleteEducation needs to be encoraged to students. It will help motivate them with this mural. Great, thanks!
ReplyDelete-Shawnice Rozier
Nice job, one thing I would fix would be the text, it does not fit on the building.
ReplyDelete-Nathan Travis
I love the graphic and the choice of colors. Text should flow with the image however. Adjustment to opacity would have made it seem more realistic.
ReplyDelete- Bill Pacheco
I like the reminder we all need once in a while.Education is an important aspect of life. You captured your thoughts well.I would enjoy seeing this as I pass by.-Tim Pipes
ReplyDeleteI would really enjoy seeing this on campus. It offers a break from the "school space. I think that's what I really like about this piece. You are melding education and encouragement with a beautiful scene of relaxing and reflecting. nice work! -Va merritt
ReplyDeleteI like the message you are getting across. I think the one thing I would have done differently is the font since it is a little hard to read.
ReplyDeleteClaudia Munoz
I like this mural because the seagulls and the sun remind me of the beach.
ReplyDelete-Anthony Sefcik
This artwork is cool but if you make the text font a more readable version then add your perspective. Very good job on this project.-Aaron Haley
ReplyDeleteLove the bird and the sunset great job
ReplyDeleteAndrea Herman